Phong Tran
For my final exam I am writing a story that is about Power , corruption , betrayal , it’s about these four guys who are like brothers to each other and goes to a terrible school where there is no education they only sell drugs and make so much money. Then one of them was corrupted by the power of money and planed to steal all the money so he betrayed his brothers and they were sent to jail for illegal drugs.
In my final exam is showing command of language because in this story you actually have to read it to understand it.
In the 2nd part is structure and organized because the story tells you what going on in the story.
The 3rd part is reflection and advocacy

dam this sucks to be in jail for so long i just wish that i could go back and change my life and not sell drugs im going to tell you a southside story.It all started when I grew up in a trashy school it was the worse school In the city but thats what people from the northside say. In this school theirs group which we like to call ourselves gang memebers.We got the emo people and there’s the brotherhood and also the swagger kids and then there us the krew their only four of us thiers marcos, jose,rob and me my name is chad.all four us we're like brothers we treat each other like family because we didnt have much attention from our parents because thier always at work or they just never there. it gets lonely and cold sometimes but at the end we have each others back.The other groups well lets just say that we don’t step on each others toes but i think that they know better to not step up to us.In this school we are like the four horseman of the apocolaspe we rain hell on these people.We were the most powerful organization in the school nobody would step up to us either their scared or they just dont want to end up with a black eye or a missing tooth. when they see us walking down the hallways eveybody would step aside and look down thats call respect in this school.


In this school everyone is apart of something basically we all drug dealers. The emo people they sell this drug called angel dust The swagger kids sell molly pod some crazy stuff. The brotherhood sells some extasy pill and us we sell the classic marijuana. We were drug dealers making so much money everyday. But one us started to get greedy and that person was rob he screw all us over because he wanted more money so he had a plan. He took us all out at the same time we didn’t see it coming. Because rob was the quite type person. During class period he put some molly pod inside our locker he told some teacher that there was selling drug in our lockers. We got caught and they found it and we were arrested and were sent to jail for 6 years he took all the money and the drug and vanish out of no where.But at the end of all of this i wish that i would change my life and not sell drugs because all of this is not worth going to jail.